Comments on: Double Exposure https://www.zacharydillon.com/2021/11/13/double-exposure/ SUBJECTIVE FICTION Thu, 18 Nov 2021 03:40:41 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=6.9.4 By: Zachary Dillon https://www.zacharydillon.com/2021/11/13/double-exposure/#comment-108 Thu, 18 Nov 2021 03:40:41 +0000 https://zacharydillon.com/?p=878#comment-108 In reply to Trishikh.

Thank you so much!

]]> By: Trishikh https://www.zacharydillon.com/2021/11/13/double-exposure/#comment-107 Thu, 18 Nov 2021 02:40:03 +0000 https://zacharydillon.com/?p=878#comment-107 I just love your description. The way you take the reader to the location. Beautiful, just loved it.

]]> By: Zachary Dillon https://www.zacharydillon.com/2021/11/13/double-exposure/#comment-106 Mon, 15 Nov 2021 02:13:45 +0000 https://zacharydillon.com/?p=878#comment-106 In reply to Stephen Weihs.

I’m so glad you loved it!

I’d heard of Coover, and might have read an excerpt from “The Babysitter” in a class, but I just read it in its entirety and wow. He somehow found a way to use ALL of the answers to the “what if” question in the same story, while maintaining suspense! The comparison is flattering.

I’m excited by what I’ve done in this story, and would love to use my double exposure technique to tell something bigger. Coover is an inspirational model for that. Thanks for sharing this.

]]> By: Stephen Weihs https://www.zacharydillon.com/2021/11/13/double-exposure/#comment-105 Sat, 13 Nov 2021 22:31:21 +0000 https://zacharydillon.com/?p=878#comment-105 I loved this story! But then I am a Robert Coover fan, and this is very Robert Coover. Have you ever read Coover’s “The Babysitter”? It has a similarly wonderful anarchic vibe. Here it is — https://www.yumpu.com/en/document/view/29382373/robert-coover-the-babysitter-pdf/3

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