Comments on: Savior https://www.zacharydillon.com/2021/11/03/savior/ SUBJECTIVE FICTION Sun, 21 Nov 2021 09:10:00 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=7.0 By: Zachary Dillon https://www.zacharydillon.com/2021/11/03/savior/#comment-104 Sun, 21 Nov 2021 09:10:00 +0000 https://zacharydillon.com/?p=870#comment-104 In reply to tgg168.

I will. Thanks for reading!

]]> By: tgg168 https://www.zacharydillon.com/2021/11/03/savior/#comment-103 Sun, 21 Nov 2021 04:18:22 +0000 https://zacharydillon.com/?p=870#comment-103 Better. Work on your dialogue.

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]]> By: Zachary Dillon https://www.zacharydillon.com/2021/11/03/savior/#comment-102 Wed, 10 Nov 2021 22:59:33 +0000 https://zacharydillon.com/?p=870#comment-102 In reply to jim ilika.

Thank you, Jim. I’ll write ‘em for as long as you’ll read ‘em.

]]> By: jim ilika https://www.zacharydillon.com/2021/11/03/savior/#comment-101 Wed, 10 Nov 2021 20:16:41 +0000 https://zacharydillon.com/?p=870#comment-101 This is a nicely crafted story. I like the image of the the cross coming out of the collapsed steeple. I also find the absence of redemption, a hero, or savior in the story to be both
interesting and refreshing. But, that probable says a bit too much about me. Keep them coming Zac.

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