Comments on: Easy Money https://www.zacharydillon.com/2021/08/20/easy-money/ SUBJECTIVE FICTION Fri, 17 Sep 2021 05:54:40 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=7.1 By: Zachary Dillon https://www.zacharydillon.com/2021/08/20/easy-money/#comment-56 Fri, 17 Sep 2021 05:54:40 +0000 https://zacharydillon.com/?p=629#comment-56 In reply to James Moon.

Thank you so much! I feel very present in a scene when I write. It’s nice to hear that it carries through to the reader. Thanks for reading!

]]> By: James Moon https://www.zacharydillon.com/2021/08/20/easy-money/#comment-55 Fri, 17 Sep 2021 03:01:43 +0000 https://zacharydillon.com/?p=629#comment-55 You have crafted that short story really well. Your writing style is light, but vivid. You capture the feeling of being in the moment there and then really well

]]> By: Zachary Dillon https://www.zacharydillon.com/2021/08/20/easy-money/#comment-54 Sat, 21 Aug 2021 07:06:28 +0000 https://zacharydillon.com/?p=629#comment-54 In reply to jim ilika.

Haha, thank you. I hope the casual cruelty I inflicted on this character hasn’t colored your opinion of me.

]]> By: jim ilika https://www.zacharydillon.com/2021/08/20/easy-money/#comment-53 Sat, 21 Aug 2021 00:03:47 +0000 https://zacharydillon.com/?p=629#comment-53 Well, I couldn’t imagine doing this for $200. Or, $2000. I don’t think that I would care to remain friends with these guys. What dicks. I have never liked bullies or casual cruelty. The drifting off and feeling like you were falling was both vivid and real. What a nightmare. Zac, if you ever need $200 this badly, call me.

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